Earlier today Sonja Brentjes, the co-author of the recent Skeptical Inquirer piece criticizing the traveling exhibition 1001 Inventions, replied to my October 20 blog post about her article. Her criticism was lengthy and sustained, so as I did with Philip Coppens' reply to me, I am presenting Brentjes' criticism below in the left-hand column with my reply in the right-hand column. Please do read the original piece before reading the following discussion. In sum, Brentjes is correct that my broader criticism was inelegantly stated and implied more than I had warrant to assume, but my specific criticisms of the medieval texts in question are not wrong. A later comment from Brentjes noting that I incorrectly called Ibn Firnas a Moor when he was in fact a Berber is completely right, and I apologize for the error. (As per Brentjes' later comment about typographic errors, I have slightly amended her comments to correct obvious typos.)
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WIKI-SLAP Jim
11/7/2012 04:49:13 am
Jason,
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11/7/2012 06:37:15 am
Sometimes I forget that rhetorical hyperbole comes across as literal online. You are correct that I am referring to the convention, established by Ben Franklin, of demarking current as passing from positive to negative whereas the electrons move from negative to positive. Of course I don't mean this is really a "lie." That was just a turn of phrase. I should be more careful or Philip Coppens will accuse me of an anti-electric conspiracy!
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Jim (formerly WIKI-SLAP Jim)
11/7/2012 07:23:22 am
An anti-electric conspiracy dating back to the time of Ben Franklin! I had thought the premise behind NBC's "Revolution" (http://www.nbc.com/revolution/) was ridiculous, but now the pieces are starting to fall into place.
sonja brentjes
11/11/2012 10:08:29 am
hi jason,
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11/11/2012 10:52:13 am
I don't think we're really that far apart, Sonja. You're quite right that it is a problem that I don't know the exhibit or the catalog—which was my point: Your article does not present enough information to understand exactly what the exhibit claims, and I shouldn't have to go out and try to order a catalog from the exhibit to evaluate the claims in your article. That might be fine for an academic discussion, but Skeptical Inquirer is sold as a popular magazine, so it should give the readers enough information to understand everything. If the claim comes from a couple of lines in an Arabic text, the reader should know what they say and why they contradict the exhibit’s claim. If I’m not to take the exhibit’s word for it, I shouldn’t have to take yours, either. Without this information—and this is my point—we are left with the impression that the Arabic sources supported the idea of powered flight, which you reject by physics. This is more of a writing problem than an ideological one: If you bring up a topic, you need to answer the reader’s questions about it.
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